I need to say that I like the show, I love the cast, and John is doing a great job. In my opinion world in which the story is set is amazing, it's interesting, it has depth. Now to go on things that don't attract me about the show.
This is all my personal opinion and reflects only my view and my personal taste.
1) To start with I'm from Europe and it's too late to watch it live, but I watch every episode on youtube so I think that twitch is not only thing you need to consider when looking at what is the viewer base of the show.
2) In my opinion so far players look op. Some player I think already have the highest skill in brawl or something like that that is used for combat.I feel that they can do whatever they want and "get away" with it or have some minor or medium repercussions. I know that they have rule set that is build for that thing, but I think that it should be more strict. Every movie has the point where everything goes wrong or there is something huge that is happening and I don't see or feel it in this scenario.
3) I feel that Zeke is too good to be playing a "bad guy". The moment when Geoff's character lies to him about his sisters diary and Zeke just took the easier route was bad decision and I think it isn't playing by the character and that moment somewhat killed the "don't know what is going to happen moment". Now I know that Geoff will be dominant leader, dominate everyone in group and it will have no backfire from other guys when they should be playing bad guys. (I can allude to I think on first episode where Geoff said that he is usually dominant in group and would like to work on that, to become more "flexible").
4) The story so far doesn't have clear adversary, yes they have "The list" and ingame factions, but it's like in singleplayer games, you just play mission after mission and that's it. In Swan Song you had many adversary's, group had to make hard decisions and there was conflict inside the group.
Thanks for entertaining us!